So I've been writing a bit lately. First I started off with a story that was going to be about "me" but only a few
people would have known that.
I got about 100 pages and then... Quit. (lolz)
Didn't think that it would be interesting to enough people, despite the fact that a few people said that they liked
it.
But since then I've come up with a new idea for a story. So here's my summary.
Just a note, it does include the ending, which may eventually change, but for now that's what it is.
I just need a few people other than the four who have already read it, to read it and give me some more suggestions
and things you think I should change and/or add...
So here we go, the summary.
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A "broken" robot named Spica meets Nicaea, our Hero of this story, on a ship heading to Space Station X (it's
called X for now, due to not having a name as of yet).
As the story progresses, Nic (what Spica is going to call him throughout the story) is unknowingly helped by Spica
with problems he is having trying to destroy an alien race who is threatening mankind.
Because everyone (including Nic) think of Spica as "broken", he brushes off what she's blabbing on and on about as
nonsense and doesn't give it another though.
He doesn't realize his mistake until too late, when Spica is caught up in the crossfire between the Humans and the
Aliens, and her memory card is destroyed beyond repair (and no data is able to be recovered).
In her last moments, he realizes that he was in love with her, and vows to destroy the Aliens in any way possible.
As we get closer to the end of the story, it seems hopeless for the Humans, until one day Nic looks up into the
night sky and sees a start twinkling (the star just so happens to be Spica). As soon as he sees the star, the
brighest start in the night sky, he has a flashback of the times he shared with Spica, and he finally remembers
what she was telling him about.
Using that knowledge, the humans were eventually able to prevail over the Aliens, and survive.
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So that's basically it. I have a lot more small things that I have figured out for it, but that's the basic story.
Now, what she tells him during the story are things that he finally realizes as her telling him about where she
came from, who made her, why it's dangerous for her to be where she is, and a bunch of other things, which all
helps them figure out more about the aliens and stuff like that.
Kinda confusing, but it'll be easier to understand when I have it all written out... xD
Well, tell me what you guys think... I think it's pretty interesting, and so have the other people I've told...
Hope you guys think the same! Let me know if there's anything you think I should change, or totally remove.
Thanks.
people would have known that.
I got about 100 pages and then... Quit. (lolz)
Didn't think that it would be interesting to enough people, despite the fact that a few people said that they liked
it.
But since then I've come up with a new idea for a story. So here's my summary.
Just a note, it does include the ending, which may eventually change, but for now that's what it is.
I just need a few people other than the four who have already read it, to read it and give me some more suggestions
and things you think I should change and/or add...
So here we go, the summary.
----------
A "broken" robot named Spica meets Nicaea, our Hero of this story, on a ship heading to Space Station X (it's
called X for now, due to not having a name as of yet).
As the story progresses, Nic (what Spica is going to call him throughout the story) is unknowingly helped by Spica
with problems he is having trying to destroy an alien race who is threatening mankind.
Because everyone (including Nic) think of Spica as "broken", he brushes off what she's blabbing on and on about as
nonsense and doesn't give it another though.
He doesn't realize his mistake until too late, when Spica is caught up in the crossfire between the Humans and the
Aliens, and her memory card is destroyed beyond repair (and no data is able to be recovered).
In her last moments, he realizes that he was in love with her, and vows to destroy the Aliens in any way possible.
As we get closer to the end of the story, it seems hopeless for the Humans, until one day Nic looks up into the
night sky and sees a start twinkling (the star just so happens to be Spica). As soon as he sees the star, the
brighest start in the night sky, he has a flashback of the times he shared with Spica, and he finally remembers
what she was telling him about.
Using that knowledge, the humans were eventually able to prevail over the Aliens, and survive.
----------
So that's basically it. I have a lot more small things that I have figured out for it, but that's the basic story.
Now, what she tells him during the story are things that he finally realizes as her telling him about where she
came from, who made her, why it's dangerous for her to be where she is, and a bunch of other things, which all
helps them figure out more about the aliens and stuff like that.
Kinda confusing, but it'll be easier to understand when I have it all written out... xD
Well, tell me what you guys think... I think it's pretty interesting, and so have the other people I've told...
Hope you guys think the same! Let me know if there's anything you think I should change, or totally remove.
Thanks.