@Chuckie100
I got sidetracked this weekend with other things, but I'll search my hard drives for my fan fiction or GVG-398 when I get home tonight. Sorry for the delay.
I hope you will like it. My version pushes deeper into the son's manipulation of his mother.
In my version he plays on his mother's guilt for the role she played in her husband/son's father leaving and the fear she'd surely have of driving her son away, too. He'd play on that fear and offer her opportunities for her to both grow personally, and to build/strengthen her relation with her son by keeping him happy in ways she'd previously failed. The movie has an obvious theme of her trying to comfort her son, but I feel additional motivation would be needed for her to cross certain boundaries so quickly.
I took the story more towards the mom being responsible for her husband/son's father because she was too uptight, proper, and unwilling to submit or play kinky.
In addition to his friends making fun of him and mocking the fact that his dad left, they also make insulting comments about the mother not being a good enough woman to keep a man. (I also throw in that the kid's father has told him that the reason he left them was because his mother was a such a prim, proper, stuck up prude. The Dad has tried to make it work, but her unwillingness to take care of his needs for intimacy, sexuality, and playful sex forced him to find another woman. (One specific, she was so shy, modest, and prudish that she refused to even take baths with her husband, as she thought it imprudent....I added that because it provides additional motivation for the son to keep asking her her to bathe with him. It is not simply for own erotic thrills, he's also trying to HELP her relax and expand her boundaries so that she won't continue to drive away the men in her life, including him. )
It's one of my all-time favorites and worked on several different variations with alternate motivations, decision trees, coercion vs seduction, etc. etc. Because I worked on so many different versions for this beloved flick, it may take me a couple hours to locate all the different versions. Many are only slightly different and few, if any, are 100% complete for the movie. I'll do my best to get them all together and share them with you in a zip file. (Please forgive me in advance if I never actually finished 100% of the story. I may have...or I may have not. I'll share what I have right away to get that out of the way and...if I didn't finish the project, Ill make that my next one to finish so I have something of value to contribute as a way of saying thanks for all you do here.
Cheers
