I have re-uploaded my all original fan-fiction for SPRD-1359. Since I originally posted it several days ago, I am loading it on this new entry and put it on the old, original post as an edit, as well.
I like to remind people that it is NOT A LITERAL TRANSLATION from Japanese to English.
Why?
I don't know Japanese and the software for translating audio from a computer still seems to stink.
(I should probably learn how to use one though.)
I enjoy creating a story with dialog that seems believable in relation to the verbal and non-verbal cues from the actors, apparent storyline, etc.
I've received decent feedback online in the past, and a real-life kinky woman who is a friend (not a girlfriend) thought my subs for BKD-97 were so good she could hardly believe they were 100% fan-fiction from my perverted mind.
I like to scatter in a few bad, Dad style jokes, now and again. Perhaps you'll catch one or two.
Anyway....
I'm very proud of my work on this. I spent well over 40 hours writing, editing, re-writing, editing some more, etc., etc.
I hope it gets good reviews from all the members on here who like my brand of kink.
That said...
In regards to the kink content....
- Mother-son incest (obviously) The mom, played by Rieko Hiraoka, puts in one of the all-time great ACTING performances I've ever seen in JAV. The son is believable and very well-hung for a JAV performer.
- Light Dom/sub
- Pregnancy risk
- A bit of romance
If you enjoyed my all original work for BKD-97, you'll probably also like this one, too.
Some things that I'd appreciate feedback on are:
- Size and color of subtitles (I prefer colored and larger than ordinary white and small)
- Timing of subtitles (I tend to start them up to a second before the actor speaks and end them a second or more afterwards for emphasis. I'd like to know what other people think as it will help my future projects.)
Pix for examples
https://ibb.co/sRBzV0s
https://ibb.co/LvBtgHY
https://ibb.co/SXrMXqD
https://ibb.co/CWtyDFN




- Wording (Did I over-use any phrases, terms, or subjects? Does it need to be more diverse thematically? Too much emphasis on the kink elements, such as pregnancy risk, Etc.?)
Any and all feedback will be appreciated.
Enjoy
I like to remind people that it is NOT A LITERAL TRANSLATION from Japanese to English.
Why?
I don't know Japanese and the software for translating audio from a computer still seems to stink.
(I should probably learn how to use one though.)
I enjoy creating a story with dialog that seems believable in relation to the verbal and non-verbal cues from the actors, apparent storyline, etc.
I've received decent feedback online in the past, and a real-life kinky woman who is a friend (not a girlfriend) thought my subs for BKD-97 were so good she could hardly believe they were 100% fan-fiction from my perverted mind.
I like to scatter in a few bad, Dad style jokes, now and again. Perhaps you'll catch one or two.
Anyway....
I'm very proud of my work on this. I spent well over 40 hours writing, editing, re-writing, editing some more, etc., etc.
I hope it gets good reviews from all the members on here who like my brand of kink.
That said...
In regards to the kink content....
- Mother-son incest (obviously) The mom, played by Rieko Hiraoka, puts in one of the all-time great ACTING performances I've ever seen in JAV. The son is believable and very well-hung for a JAV performer.
- Light Dom/sub
- Pregnancy risk
- A bit of romance
If you enjoyed my all original work for BKD-97, you'll probably also like this one, too.
Some things that I'd appreciate feedback on are:
- Size and color of subtitles (I prefer colored and larger than ordinary white and small)
- Timing of subtitles (I tend to start them up to a second before the actor speaks and end them a second or more afterwards for emphasis. I'd like to know what other people think as it will help my future projects.)
Pix for examples
https://ibb.co/sRBzV0s
https://ibb.co/LvBtgHY
https://ibb.co/SXrMXqD
https://ibb.co/CWtyDFN





- Wording (Did I over-use any phrases, terms, or subjects? Does it need to be more diverse thematically? Too much emphasis on the kink elements, such as pregnancy risk, Etc.?)
Any and all feedback will be appreciated.
Enjoy
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